The Frozen Tears

It was a fine winter night. The snowflakes falling from the sky were filling the air with white pearls. Wearing her nightgown, she stepped out of her room.

Looking at the frozen window, her sense of well being continued. She smoothened her messy hair, mended the old dress and opened a bottle of champagne.

She took her mother by her arm. Sitting next to her, she was unable to get hold onto her tears. She kissed her forehead, knelt down on the floor and cried and cried.

The winter nights with snow splashing like silver rains were her mother’s favourite past and now her mother’s laugh in the photograph was her endearing memory!

The trail of tears frozen on her eyes made her life a little blurry. Her mother’s smile cleared all her agony , gave her the strength to revitalize her faith and made all her memories come alive!💕

Now, her heart still beats and bleeds for her mother’s one last sight.

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  1. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Fabulous blog

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  2. Shubham's avatar Shubham says:

    U talented girl ✨

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  3. Sumana Sharma's avatar Sumana Sharma says:

    Very well written

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  4. Sumana's avatar Sumana says:

    Very well written

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    2. Shiv's avatar Shiv says:

      Beautiful lines

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  5. Naman's avatar Naman says:

    Beautifully written 👌💙

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  6. Adiba's avatar Adiba says:

    Lovely 🌹❤️

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  7. Nitya's avatar Nitya says:

    Beautiful❤

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  8. Riya's avatar Riya says:

    Bful 🌸❤

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  9. Sanjana saxena's avatar Sanjana saxena says:

    Nice ! 👌👌💞

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  10. deeparamola's avatar deeparamola says:

    Keep writing such a beautiful piece😘

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  11. Kishore's avatar Kishore says:

    So deep ❤

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  12. Archi jain's avatar Archi jain says:

    Amazing 🙌❤

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  13. Keerti's avatar Keerti says:

    It’s really very good 😍😍

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  14. Akash1908's avatar Akash1908 says:

    Nice 👍

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    1. Mansi sharma's avatar Mansi sharma says:

      Nice💗👍🏻

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    2. Kareena khan's avatar Kareena khan says:

      Nice 👍🏻❤️

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  15. Himanshu Matta's avatar Himanshu Matta says:

    Amazing 🌸🌸

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  16. BHAVIKA DHINGRA's avatar BHAVIKA DHINGRA says:

    beautiful 🌸👌

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  17. manasvi08's avatar manasvi08 says:

    Just like a shining pearl, your words soothes me…So proud of you my little one❤️🌼

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  18. Deepti's avatar Deepti says:

    Wonderful poem yet again!..Nice dedication:)💫

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  19. Hemashree Rana's avatar Hemashree Rana says:

    Wowww! It’s soo touching… Simply beautiful!💖 Soo proud of uh mah girl!😘💕😍

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    1. Kirti's avatar Kirti says:

      Awsmm you nailed it ❣❤

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  20. Shruti Mittal's avatar Shruti Mittal says:

    :’) Thankyou❤️

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    1. Komal aggarwal's avatar Komal aggarwal says:

      Astonishing my girl ❤😘keep shining 😍💥and make us happy by ur heart touching poetry🤗

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    3. Deepti chauhan's avatar Deepti chauhan says:

      Wonderful poem yet again!..Nice dedication:)💫

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    4. Always welcome!❤️

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  21. Adv Mohit's avatar Adv Mohit says:

    So heart touching 😍

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    1. Muskan's avatar Muskan says:

      This is wonderful Akanksha…!!! Amazing piece of writing✍️ keep going.. 😘

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